Some conversations
seem too surreal to be true
My dearest heart, I feel you, you are so close!
You're like a light that never leaves me alone
You rub my soul and I never drown....
In the invisible abyss...
-- I go in search with you
You're like an optimistic companion
---a touch, a feel, a lingering scent...
...comfortably curled within me
Thank God for what you are...
You are my inspiration, my little heart
There's nothing better than this feeling
the feeling of having the best mate is ecstasy...
Keep whispering the melodies of love!
In the invisible abyss...
-- I go in search with you
You're like an optimistic companion
---a touch, a feel, a lingering scent...
...comfortably curled within me
Thank God for what you are...
You are my inspiration, my little heart
There's nothing better than this feeling
the feeling of having the best mate is ecstasy...
Keep whispering the melodies of love!
sweet whispers are there in the heart. This is a beautiful testimony of a precious love.
ReplyDeleteSuch gratitude for mutuality makes sweet sense. It is thrilling to read the images that arise from it!
ReplyDeleteKeep whispering the melodies of love! - Great lovely line and the perfect ending, this is such a passionate poem.
ReplyDeleteThe last line bowled me over.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem. Great for Valentine's Day
ReplyDeleteSweet words of love.
Greetings from far away Polish.
Lucia
It's truly an ecstatic feel to hear those melodies of light and love...Happy V-Day :)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem on love:-)
ReplyDeleteHeart indeed is the language of our soul. Very beautiful, Ma'am. :)
ReplyDeleteYou are very lucky to have such an ecstatic mate whispering little nothings into you shell pink ear Panchali:)
ReplyDeleteI like that the heart - your companion, who's whispering about love ~ lovely poem ~ Happy Heart Day!
ReplyDeleteHow very sweet and perfect for today ~ Wishing you Happy Hearts Day ~
ReplyDeletei like the warmth of your heart...the enduring of love
ReplyDeletethe realization that you are with the one that completes you
and singing that same song....
welcome back
I love the absolute depths of this love you describe here. Total and wanted:)
ReplyDeleteEileen
A very heart felt composition. The last line is overwhelming.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful description-every word elicits an image--but then you are always good at this.
ReplyDeleteso sweet... makes my heart smile = )
ReplyDeleteindeed a found treasure kept close to the heart....
ReplyDeleteSweet one, Panchali di. :)
ReplyDeleteMy well wishes to that lovely heart of yours.
Have a great week ahead. :)
Ye dil kambakht bahut baatein karta hai... kab tak sirf hum sunte rahe in baaton ko... kaash koi aur inko bina lafzon ke sun le
ReplyDeleteIt is a privilege to be at 'the receiving end' of all things nice. Seldom comes when asked for but readily given for the chosen ones! Nicely Panchali!
ReplyDeleteHank
Panchali, oneofaclass is hosting Haiku Horizons every Sunday to take over from Haiku Heights.
ReplyDeleteThis is so heartwarming!
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone for your beautiful comments.
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