Thursday, February 13, 2014

My Heart Speaks~


Some conversations
seem too surreal to be true
My dearest heart, I feel you, you are so close!
You're like a light that never leaves me alone
 You rub my soul and I never drown....
In the invisible abyss...
                      -- I go in search with you
You're like an optimistic companion
---a touch, a feel, a lingering scent... 
                              ...comfortably curled within me
Thank God for what you are...

You are my inspiration, my little heart
There's nothing better than this feeling
the feeling of having the best mate is ecstasy...
Keep whispering the melodies of love!

24 comments:

  1. sweet whispers are there in the heart. This is a beautiful testimony of a precious love.

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  2. Such gratitude for mutuality makes sweet sense. It is thrilling to read the images that arise from it!

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  3. Keep whispering the melodies of love! - Great lovely line and the perfect ending, this is such a passionate poem.

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  4. The last line bowled me over.

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  5. Beautiful poem. Great for Valentine's Day
    Sweet words of love.
    Greetings from far away Polish.
    Lucia

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  6. It's truly an ecstatic feel to hear those melodies of light and love...Happy V-Day :)

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  7. Heart indeed is the language of our soul. Very beautiful, Ma'am. :)

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  8. You are very lucky to have such an ecstatic mate whispering little nothings into you shell pink ear Panchali:)

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  9. I like that the heart - your companion, who's whispering about love ~ lovely poem ~ Happy Heart Day!

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  10. How very sweet and perfect for today ~ Wishing you Happy Hearts Day ~

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  11. i like the warmth of your heart...the enduring of love
    the realization that you are with the one that completes you
    and singing that same song....


    welcome back

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  12. I love the absolute depths of this love you describe here. Total and wanted:)

    Eileen

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  13. A very heart felt composition. The last line is overwhelming.

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  14. Beautiful description-every word elicits an image--but then you are always good at this.

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  15. so sweet... makes my heart smile = )

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  16. indeed a found treasure kept close to the heart....

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  17. Sweet one, Panchali di. :)
    My well wishes to that lovely heart of yours.

    Have a great week ahead. :)

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  18. Ye dil kambakht bahut baatein karta hai... kab tak sirf hum sunte rahe in baaton ko... kaash koi aur inko bina lafzon ke sun le

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  19. It is a privilege to be at 'the receiving end' of all things nice. Seldom comes when asked for but readily given for the chosen ones! Nicely Panchali!

    Hank

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  20. Panchali, oneofaclass is hosting Haiku Horizons every Sunday to take over from Haiku Heights.

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  21. This is so heartwarming!

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  22. It's surprising how the heart guides us better than than the brain in many situations. Very nicely written :-)

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  23. Thanks everyone for your beautiful comments.

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