Blown off to the sky
Li'l squares, flying side by side
Rainbow in motion
Flirting with rain-clouds
Dreams marinated in strings
Ride upon the wind
Treading in snail's pace
Ignoring the monsoon rain
Shuffling kites stir dreams
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Tako (kite).
Lovely imagery...flirting with clouds...rainbow in motion.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Maggie for that lovely comment. I do appreciate.:)
DeleteWelcome Panchali!
ReplyDeleteI like haiku.
They look very beautiful kites on blue pressure.
I send greetings.
Lucia
So pleased you liked it, Lucia. Thanks a lot!
DeleteGreetings from India.
Panchali
Flirting with clouds sounds like fun!
ReplyDeletehaha...I liked that too :)Thanks wabisabipoet!
DeleteYou warmed up and the second and third were complex,clever and beautiful, while thank goodness retaining the magical simplicity of haiku. Some unique ideas in the 2nd, and the 3rd a firm favourite!
ReplyDeleteComing from you, this is a very gratifying compliment, Managua Gunn. Thanks... :)))
DeleteReally nice, Panchali.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa..
DeleteI like the rainbow in motion
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed, Brudberg!:)
DeleteRainbow in motion is lovely also the whole set of haiku are excellent ~ make the kites come alive with your words ~ ^_^
ReplyDeleteacreativeharbor.com...^_^ Love this one!! And you... write comments that make me feel on top of the world. May all writers be blessed with readers such as you... :)Thank you!
Deleterainbows in motion...ha....very cool image...dreams marinating on strings is a very cool phrase as well...really, well done...smiles.
ReplyDeleteBrian, Your comment made me smile...and made it worth!!! thank you.... :))
Deletewonderful set....espec. the 'marinated dreams'...
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed, joanne! Thanks a ton!
DeleteI love "Shuffling kites stir dreams." I really don't think a person can look at a kite flying without dreaming. At least i can't. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteMary, You're so much like me!! From my childhood days, I have been quite a dreamer...and flying kites make my dreams soar high...:D
DeleteThank you so much. I have learned a lot from you and other poets here.
Thanks for the inspiration!
What a lovely pic! And equally beautiful lines!
ReplyDeleteIndrani..It was- and is- like a magical journey..Thanks for the compliments!
DeleteYour take on the topic is clever &well connected, & Dreams marinated in strings--i liked it best.They take us where we want to be.
ReplyDeleteLove,always!
Indu...Thank you so much for your warm comment. May all writers be blessed with readers such as you... :)Thank you, B'day gal--many more happy returns!!
Deletelove n hugs always:)
Superb write up . I loved the second one . flirting with rain clouds and snail's pace .
ReplyDeleteNice Imagination
Aah, thanks so much Vishal for being such a support! I am glad you liked those phrases...thanks to that beautiful image that I picked from google-image!
DeleteAwesome composition ... all three are gorgeous, but my favorite is for sure the first one. Thank you Panchali for sharing this with us all here on Carpe Diem. I am glad that you have found your way to this daily haiku meme.
ReplyDeleteWow, (Thanks) x 3. :)))))Kristjaan!! Credit goes to your prompt!! I get inspirations from completely unconnected- and unexpected- events. Thanks for the compliments... it feels good when you say it!!
Delete...handsome words flirting with beautiful imagery:):)
ReplyDeleteWow...what a comment!! It took me high up on cloud nine...Thank you so much, Amit!
DeleteNice one..........
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Thanks Debopam:))
DeleteLovely as usual, panchaali
ReplyDeleteSarala...Your presence here has thrilled me. Thanks...
DeleteI wasn't found of haiku but this post of yours has really made me appreciate it:) Beautiful:)
ReplyDeleteBushra...even I am not an expert in writing Haiku--syllable restrictions make writing difficult!I was actually expecting myself to write worse than this... given the restriction.hahhaa...
DeleteThank goodness, this post made you smile...muaah/
Thanks Rajesh for the encouragement :))
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Geetashree!! so glad I didn't freak you out...! :))))))))))hehe..
DeleteThanks re...
Beautifully versed!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Deepak!!
Deletealoha Panchali - i like the first ku here especially. aloha.
ReplyDeletealoha 19planets! Glad you liked my take..ha! Thanks...
DeleteBeautiful as always. 'Rainbow in motion,' what an imagery. Kudos!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Eashwar for your constant support and encouragement! Do appreciate :)
DeleteThey truly are moving rainbows ... loved it !!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Speck. Glad you enjoyed :))
DeleteLovely verses, specially the last one ~ Have a good weekend ~
ReplyDeleteWhat's up Panchali di? In full swing mood of poetry these days?? Nevertheless, I always loved reading them..keep writing :)
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