Friday, March 29, 2013

Soaring Dreams



Blown off to the sky
Li'l squares, flying side by side
Rainbow in motion

Flirting with rain-clouds
Dreams marinated in strings
Ride upon the wind

Treading in snail's pace
Ignoring the monsoon rain
Shuffling kites stir dreams

This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Tako (kite).

50 comments:

  1. Lovely imagery...flirting with clouds...rainbow in motion.

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    1. Thank you, Maggie for that lovely comment. I do appreciate.:)

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  2. Welcome Panchali!
    I like haiku.
    They look very beautiful kites on blue pressure.
    I send greetings.
    Lucia

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    1. So pleased you liked it, Lucia. Thanks a lot!
      Greetings from India.
      Panchali

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  3. Flirting with clouds sounds like fun!

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    1. haha...I liked that too :)Thanks wabisabipoet!

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  4. You warmed up and the second and third were complex,clever and beautiful, while thank goodness retaining the magical simplicity of haiku. Some unique ideas in the 2nd, and the 3rd a firm favourite!

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    1. Coming from you, this is a very gratifying compliment, Managua Gunn. Thanks... :)))

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  5. I like the rainbow in motion

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    1. Glad you enjoyed, Brudberg!:)

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  6. Rainbow in motion is lovely also the whole set of haiku are excellent ~ make the kites come alive with your words ~ ^_^

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    1. acreativeharbor.com...^_^ Love this one!! And you... write comments that make me feel on top of the world. May all writers be blessed with readers such as you... :)Thank you!

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  7. rainbows in motion...ha....very cool image...dreams marinating on strings is a very cool phrase as well...really, well done...smiles.

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    1. Brian, Your comment made me smile...and made it worth!!! thank you.... :))

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  8. wonderful set....espec. the 'marinated dreams'...

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    1. Glad you enjoyed, joanne! Thanks a ton!

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  9. I love "Shuffling kites stir dreams." I really don't think a person can look at a kite flying without dreaming. At least i can't. Smiles.

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    1. Mary, You're so much like me!! From my childhood days, I have been quite a dreamer...and flying kites make my dreams soar high...:D
      Thank you so much. I have learned a lot from you and other poets here.
      Thanks for the inspiration!

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  10. What a lovely pic! And equally beautiful lines!

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    1. Indrani..It was- and is- like a magical journey..Thanks for the compliments!

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  11. Your take on the topic is clever &well connected, & Dreams marinated in strings--i liked it best.They take us where we want to be.
    Love,always!

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    1. Indu...Thank you so much for your warm comment. May all writers be blessed with readers such as you... :)Thank you, B'day gal--many more happy returns!!
      love n hugs always:)

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  12. Superb write up . I loved the second one . flirting with rain clouds and snail's pace .

    Nice Imagination

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    1. Aah, thanks so much Vishal for being such a support! I am glad you liked those phrases...thanks to that beautiful image that I picked from google-image!

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  13. Awesome composition ... all three are gorgeous, but my favorite is for sure the first one. Thank you Panchali for sharing this with us all here on Carpe Diem. I am glad that you have found your way to this daily haiku meme.

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    1. Wow, (Thanks) x 3. :)))))Kristjaan!! Credit goes to your prompt!! I get inspirations from completely unconnected- and unexpected- events. Thanks for the compliments... it feels good when you say it!!

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  14. ...handsome words flirting with beautiful imagery:):)

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    1. Wow...what a comment!! It took me high up on cloud nine...Thank you so much, Amit!

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    1. Sarala...Your presence here has thrilled me. Thanks...

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    1. Thanks Rajesh for the encouragement :))

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  17. I wasn't found of haiku but this post of yours has really made me appreciate it:) Beautiful:)

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    1. Bushra...even I am not an expert in writing Haiku--syllable restrictions make writing difficult!I was actually expecting myself to write worse than this... given the restriction.hahhaa...
      Thank goodness, this post made you smile...muaah/

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    1. Thanks a lot, Geetashree!! so glad I didn't freak you out...! :))))))))))hehe..
      Thanks re...

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  19. aloha Panchali - i like the first ku here especially. aloha.

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    1. aloha 19planets! Glad you liked my take..ha! Thanks...

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  20. Beautiful as always. 'Rainbow in motion,' what an imagery. Kudos!

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    1. Thank you, Eashwar for your constant support and encouragement! Do appreciate :)

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  21. They truly are moving rainbows ... loved it !!!

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    1. Thank you, Speck. Glad you enjoyed :))

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  22. Lovely verses, specially the last one ~ Have a good weekend ~

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  23. What's up Panchali di? In full swing mood of poetry these days?? Nevertheless, I always loved reading them..keep writing :)

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