This poem bagged SECOND SUCCESSIVE GOLD Blog-a-Ton Batom !!
This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 34; the thirty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "Of-Course, I'm insane"
This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 34; the thirty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "Of-Course, I'm insane"

"Of-course, I am
insane”
‘A blood thirsty terrorist’
who smeared the earth with blood
who smeared the earth with blood
Now, lying
in the grave, fatigued...
With
no headstones, epitaphs
Waiting to get decayed…
Waiting to get decayed…
Like
a dead skin of a snake
Under heaps of unwanted scraps
Intrepid
sounds and smells of memory
Fill
me with pity and disgust
‘I
am myself and my circumstances….’
Not
even a maggot would
Grow
out of my debris
The
pages are a testimony
With
guns, blood-shed, grenades
I
numbed many hearts lurking in the dark
Confronting spasms of hatred,
My soul changed tracks since then
My soul changed tracks since then
We have grown apart...
sharing neither anxieties, nor sins
sharing neither anxieties, nor sins
‘I
am myself and my circumstances…’
Shivering
beneath the wintery nights
Like
a dismembered animal
I
realize, this is not a story of a hero
But,
merely the narrative of a cynic,
Of
a nasty man, silenced to death at last
Though
an awakening seems ridiculous now;
But, ….‘Silence is a great healer’
Civilization covers up uncomfortable silences
The
damp earth is giving way
The
grass springing back in its wake
…allow me to emerge as a good human being!
…allow me to emerge as a good human being!
‘I
am myself and my circumstances…’
[After all, repentance speaks louder than words….]
"There
have been occasions of silencing of nature, including our very own human nature,
and we need to let this silence break and speak…..”—Martin Heidegger—
‘I am myself and my
circumstances….’--- Famous
existentialist, Ortega y Gasset proposes that philosophy must overcome
the limitations of both idealism (in which reality
is centered around the ego) and ancient-medieval realism (in which reality
is located outside the subject) in order to focus on the only truthful reality
(i.e., "my life" — the life of each individual). He suggests that
there is no me without things and things are nothing without me: "I"
(human being) cannot be detached from "my circumstances" (world). This
led Ortega y Gasset to pronounce his famous maxim "Yo soy yo y mi circunstancia" ("I am
I and my circumstance") (Meditaciones del Quijote, 1914) which
he always placed at the core of his philosophy—source from wiki!!
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This made my heart tremble,so glad to read your thoughts Mam. I am with you in the act of providing those heartless morons with retribution. I wish the hatred from every good human transform the pain & agony, so that a better world could be created...
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT Mam. Take care!
Amen Tania....mob celebrating the death of the sinner and not the sin sounds 'Barbaric' to me. Maybe, he deserved that death---but, I hated the cheering that followed after his death.
DeleteBut truly this poem is reflection of my thoughts after I saw the news!!
Thanks for your meaningful comment...Thanks, Tanya for coming by....
Mam. This I could only expect from you! You have given that wretched souls a rare solace that every soul is worthy of (however that soul is burdened with the sins of body). Congratulations! and thanks of sharing!
ReplyDeleteMeenakshi...awww, you read it so well, my dear!! thanks for the lovely comment... coming from you that's quite a compliment.
DeleteThank you!
call it co-incidence or call it weird....my post is on the same theme!! only difference being, urs is a poem....!! wow very well written Panchali...all the best! will it be an encore this time ?
ReplyDeleteYes Princess, wise woman think alike :D:D...I guess, the recent execution and the word 'insanity' triggered the thoughts... I guess THIS is what one writes for... this fellowship. Thank you...:)))
DeleteNah....there are many more here to grab the batom this time. You are ONE of them:))I need to read all the entries now...lot of reading to catch up!:))
congratulations!! see? i did predict it would be an encore! well deserved...and i guess mine might have been the first vote for ur post! congrats again!
Deleteawww... I'll take you compliment to mean more than they actually do.... permit myself to feel elated!! Thanks a zillion, princess. You are always special...and I'll remember your sweet gesture :)
DeleteSoon you'll be there----mark my words!♥
First time on your blog ma'm . Thanks to WOW . The poem is exceptional . Would touch one's heart deep stirring emotions . All the best for BAT . keep writing
ReplyDeleteRegards
Maliny
Welcome to my page, Maliny :)) Thanks for the compliments...I am moved :) Hope to see you more on these pages...
DeleteI shall be on your blog soon...:))Thanks a ton!!
Oh and it does come at the right time.
ReplyDeleteYup, Rachna....Glad you could agree with this... :))Thanks :)
DeleteEven Time is a great healer... there isn't anything time can't heal and even yes, silence.. A well-timed poem and excellent one :) ATB for the BAT..
ReplyDeleteTime and silence is always a great healer...and that's how I could combine two prompts into the poem effortlessly :))
DeleteI am impressed with myself now:P... Thank you so much... you made my day, Harikrishnan...:)))
This is very very powerful ... your words always strike the senses ... superbly portrayed !!!
ReplyDeleteSpeck...Thanks for coming by...and the thumbs up.. :))) That's the mark of a true friend.... :))))
DeleteI am truly elated. Smiles.
mam u always come up with something awesome -:D :D
ReplyDelete:D:D.....AND its a pleasure to see you here...always :))))Thanks a lot!
DeleteAm speechless mam ...it's a peach of poem
ReplyDeleteThank you Anjan.... :))) Appreciate your compliment.. :))
DeleteAhh that ripped my heart out!! Yes, his final words were indeed his confession to God about the big mistake he committed. And I feel and agree with you that silence does heal. And repentance speaks louder than words. I hated him wanted him dead for all those who died and all those who lost their close ones on 26/11, but repentance does one more thing. Earns forgiveness.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my space, Chhavi. Thanks for the follow too :)))Thanks for the visit... and the feeling of satisfaction you gave me with your comment..
DeleteHope to see you more on these pages :)) Thanks!!!
you echoed thousand hearts voice - including mine
ReplyDeletethe rhythm was so really well - alike heart beats in rage.
Bow.
Glad you agree with my sentiments, Sathish...Thanks for the feeling of satisfaction you give me with your comment.. :)) Do visit again.
DeleteThanks!
Outstanding poem! You write on great subjects ma'm...Love your writings!
ReplyDeleteHappy to read your appreciation, Valli. :))) Thank you sooo much!
DeleteThe words are so powerful that it actually gave me goosebumps... I have read it twice till now..and will read it again:)
ReplyDeleteMe!!Thanks for reading it twice, am absolutely pleased!!... I love the feeling of satisfaction you give me with your comments.. :))
DeleteHugz
Wow, Panchali...this gives me chills. "Civilization covers up uncomfortable silences" indeed.
ReplyDelete"I am myself and my circumstances" -- and he alone will live with that.
Bravo for this strong write!
Thanks for coming by, Mary.. and making my day... :)) I am thrilled !!
DeleteIndeed..one lives with his/her situation....
Thanks for the encouragement:)
This one line... not even a maggot would grow out of my debris is the keystone for this piece. Brilliant reflection and write.
ReplyDeleteI am glad you liked the treatment....Happy to read your appreciation, Kim. :)))
DeleteA big thanks :)
Reads like exposé journalism on the front lines of our shared terror. I love the strong voice behind your words.
ReplyDeleteWow....Thank you sooo much for your compliments....I am so pleased :)
DeleteI am grateful, Libby.
I was amazed when I read your very strong poem. You gave a voice to a loathsome creature, put repentance in his mouth and offered the possibility of forgiveness in his plea to be allowed to reemerge as a good human being. Gives one lots to think about as any good poem does!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my space, wabisabipoet...."loathsome creature"---exactly, my feelings! But, Holier-than-thou mentality.... think how much more deadly THAT is...! I guess, our spiritual mind, has to be preserved outside our physical self...if we believe in re-birth!
DeleteI am not an intellectual, nr a political analyst, so my views may look oversimplified
I wrote what I felt as a layman ....
Thanks for being here and hope to see you more on these pages :)
Thank you!
This poem is absolutely exceptional Ma'm. I really liked your interpretation of I am myself and my circumstances, I sometimes interpret as I am myself because of my circumstances. :)
ReplyDeleteYes, Akshay...My thesis was on Martin Heidegger's 'Dasein', which literally means 'Being-there' ...and I came across this line so many times. Loved playing with it here :))) I ma delighted to note that you enjoyed the punch... :) Thanks for dropping in...and for your compliments...:))
DeleteThanks!!
WOW... that is an amazing piece of writing.. outstanding.. intense..
ReplyDeleteWelcome Deepak....That was an awesome endorsement ...! I'll cherish that comment for ages:))) Hope to see you more on these pages!
DeleteThanks a ton!!
once again I am speechless ... lets hope these people realize their mistake and world becomes a much better place . The way we are going right now , we are even afraid to step out of our house on days like 26/11 .
ReplyDeleteTTT...Good to see you after a long gap! And let me remind you, we are now being warned about revenge attacks....!! Human mind is mysterious and it's structure is as vast as the universe itself...Let's hope for a better future. Amen!
DeleteExcellent, thought provoking poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks knighsheart for your encouragement and welcome to my space :))
DeleteThis is exceptional write-up.
ReplyDeleteThanks sooo much, Rajesh !! Really appreciate your comments.
DeletePerfect weaving of words...while reading this unknowingly tear rolled out of my eyes...Magic of words!
ReplyDeleteRanjana, I just wrote what I felt.....though the resurrection of the dead-soul is a belief found in a number of eschatology. Glad it resonates with you. Thanks for coming by.. :))
DeleteThanks a bunch....:))
A wonderful take on the topic! It stirs the emotions we all have within... this poem gives pitch to so many of our voices! Thank you very much, a masterpiece as always from you!
ReplyDeleteGlad it resonates with you, Arti. Throughout the ages, the thing that we have feared most has been the human mind. And I feel this Tit-for-tat skirmishes will lead us nowhere....!Though I know, a superficial analysis doesn't dare to actually go to root-cause lest it may disturb the correctness.
DeleteThanks for the spirited comment!! You made mt day!:))
Powerful writing Panchali. Masterful use of imagery. You my friend are a poet I greatly admire.
ReplyDeleteWow...what a compliment!!!Thanks so much for the visit... and the feeling of satisfaction you give me with your comment.. :)) xoxo
DeleteA timely poem, Panchali!
ReplyDeleteYes....apparently everyone is thinking and talking about it! The word 'insane' made me write this.....thanks, Rahul:))
DeleteI agree in full with Poet laundry. Really a power work!
ReplyDeleteThanks julia, for that inspiring comment... I am so pleased...:))
DeleteIntense and powerful. Well done!
ReplyDeleteMadeleine Begun Kane
Thanks Madeleine Begun Kane, so much for your visit here, taking time to read and comment. Happy to read your appreciation. :)))
DeleteEven I wanted to join BAT with the WOW prompt but I ran out of time. Your poem exudes power and sadness too. liked it.
ReplyDeleteAlways a pleasure to have you here, Leo. Really glad that you enjoyed this poem so much to leave this compliment.:)))
DeleteThe prompts compliment each other, so I kind of let the lines write itself.... :))
Thank you.
Powerful poem and powerful message
ReplyDelete"Silence is a great healer" unless Hope is still burning in
Uma....As they say, 'hope begins in the dark', and frankly we have no other alternative!! Great having you here!Thank you for taking time to read this piece...Please do visit again:))
DeleteWell done! The disgust followed by repentance...
ReplyDeleteDeepak, I would never deprive someone of repentance - it may be all these morons are finally left with...:(((
DeleteThanks so much...
right well I am weird I would not want any healing for a person who has killed so many innocent..
ReplyDeletea strong poem I will say ..
Bikram's
Ahem...now, I don't know how to defend myself, since I am no expert. But, Bikram....aren't our bribed and biased and immoral politicians, media and intellectuals worse than these jehhadis or mass killers? My hatred towards them is no different..? Let's HANG them all !!
DeleteI think, retribution is a kind of punishment to oneself..and every soul deserves a fresh lease of life...:))
Thanks so much for reading it, Bikram...and for your views.
Exceptionally exceptional one ma'am... :)
ReplyDeletebrilliant composition... :)
Welcome to my space, I believe this is your first visit here, Cynosure :)
DeleteWOW....At my age, you cherish and appreciate pats like this more...!!
Thanks a ton!
A meaningful post, I do like the quotes weaving with your words ~
ReplyDeleteIs silence stronger...sometimes, but I also believe that words are more powerful, specially if it seeks forgiveness ~
Hugzz gurl... Well said! I am glad you gave words to my thoughts...:) Thanks a bunch, Heaven. Good to see you after a long time! :))
DeleteI dont have much to say on the first read it self, except that I loved the lines..esp the one ..Not even a Maggot would grow..actually, I liked all of them
ReplyDeleteFIF !!! Actually, I like that you like. :D Thanks for the endorsement... it means a lot to me...:))
DeleteHugzz..
This is so powerful Panchali. Power is heady when one holds a gun, but repentence comes much later. And redemption? Maybe never. The punishment is the suffering.
ReplyDeleteIndu...I thought this was from Cyber...I didn't know that you are also Zephyr!!
DeleteI firmly believe, people who brainwashed him, instigated him and gave a gun in his hand, all in name of religion, too must be hanged to death.
I guess, he got what he deserved and the suffering should end with death. Let me be mediocre, I just love it - To me, the soul is pure... that is just like any other. The inside is innocent, cozy and warm.(and that's why i separated his soul from his wretched body) I'm sure many would want to scream at this point:P:P
Lovely to see you here...always!!! thanks.. :))
I agree with all your readers who call this powerful. That is exactly what it is. You know what you mean and you've put it down so well. How can anybody not agree with you. :)
ReplyDeleteI just noticed the fall leaves falling away. We had three storms last week and the scene outside the windows of our place is just like that. Maple leaves, everywhere.:)
Divya!!I am glad you liked the approach..: Thanks for the endorsement.You made my day!:0)
DeleteAah... Lucky you! ...it must be a beautiful time for a hike and enjoy leaves crunching underfoot. PLease post some pics of the colorful maples leaves in yellow, gold, orange and red falling outside..:))
Thanks re...
Missed your wonderful posts all these days Mam...Asusual great composition..:-)
ReplyDeleteRanjana...You were sorely missed ...so good to have you back :) I am so pleased...!! Thanks a lot!
DeleteRelentless ideas and images...the emotion kept piling on...like layers of earth on the dead. Clearly expressed, well done.
ReplyDeleteWow...what a beautiful comment, Jack. I am amazed at the depth of thought you have communicated with simple words. Thanks a bunch...:)
Deleteहेल्लो मैडम, आप जब भी कोई कविता प्रकाशित करतेहै तो मई सोचता हूँ की, आप इन सबको मिलाकर कोई पुस्तक प्रकाशित क्यूँ नहीं करती हमेशा की तरह बेहद ही दमदार सब्दो का प्रयोग किया है आपने, मेरे ख्याल से एक पुस्तक प्रकाशित कर ही दीजिये, धन्यवाद्
ReplyDeleteInshahallah.....ho sakta hai, kisidin mein bhi kavi ban jayun :))) You'll be the first one to receive a free copy. Wada Raha, lucky!:D
DeleteThanks :)
mai us din ka badi besbri se intzar karunga धन्यवाद्
DeleteStand by please... Lucky:)) Thank you!
DeleteI seem to be repeating myself, you write so well. This one is heart wrenching and
ReplyDeletemade me feel all kinds of emotions. Love the maple leaves falling on your space :)
Thanks Ghaz...I wish I had words to convey my pleasure at seeing you here. Your comment is most cherished... :)) xoxo
Deletewow... amazing piece panchali di ... outstanding ....
ReplyDeleteAmit...That was a delightful comment...! Thank you for your words of praise... I am happy you liked the piece... :))Thanks!
DeleteBrilliant----you can get into the skin of any character & speak from within him.
ReplyDeleteIndu...Love your comments... they are very stimulating. Thank you for the time you give me...:))))
Deletebtw, who is Zephyr..? Initially I thought it was Cyber, but that link took me over to your space. Am getting a bit confused.
Expressed well...
ReplyDeleteThanks Devilish :)Good to see you after a long time...!
DeleteSilence is a healer, but certain wounds cannot be healed. clearly shows in the lines and also the picture u added
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my post, Neeta. The motivation for this was not a quarrel. Just events I observed after the recent death of a terrorist forced my hand so to speak.And so I did. And this poem was born. :))
DeleteRemember that song- 'man ke manjeere aaj thirakne lage'....I LOVE that song and I guess the spirit of the blog conveys the same feeling.
The pic was just to connect...:)
Thank you.
Repentance speaks louder than words! So true!! Poor devils!
ReplyDeleteRoshni...absolutely!!Closure does that to you....and that is why closure is essential.:))
DeleteGood to have you read this...Thank you!!
Wonderfully disgusting imagery within this poem! Lots of emotion, very powerful piece.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my post Charmaine !! I love a good oxymoron! I am glad, time you enjoyed wasting did not get wasted...:D:D
DeleteThanks for the follow and compliments. I hope to see you more on these pages.
Thanks a ton!
A heart wrenching one, Panchalidi.. considering it took me back to the event.
ReplyDeleteJustice has been served, however I'm not too sure if the "civilized" world took the news of his death in a civilized way...
fc*klove
Raj...Wow....you have made it worth my while to have written this poem!! Delighted to read your comment. Thank you.
DeleteHope to see you again on these pages…
I could never have any sympathy for a terrorist. Neither could I enjoy death penalty, though it was just in my opinion. Justice was done. For me, it's like a job finally done. Death, whether by a terrorist's gun or on the gallows, is not something to rejoice. Both the terrorist and the hangman meant business. That's it.
ReplyDeleteAs for ‘Silence is a great healer’, I wish our Prime Minister's silence also had that healing touch. Sadly, the silence of our PM betrays a soft underbelly of the powers-that-be of this nation.
lafzon ke zakhm aur khamoshi ka marham... bahut khoob.
http://imashwini.blogspot.in/2009/01/blog-post_13.html
Ashwini, I am happy you don't agree with my viewpoints herein... for my arguments are incomplete in any case.This could be a never-ending debate and could go on and on and on...I belong to the camp of peace and affirm a criminal's soul must also rest in peace. Frankly, I hated the ugly celebration that followed and revolved around that capital punishment; it was an obnoxious display of barbarism!!Please forgive me if i sound irrational, but this is what i felt so had to tell you.
DeleteAnd about our PM...Well,he is unable to speak because he fears losing his seat. The case is totally different ... wow, when i read my own comment, i sound so gullible! LOL
Thanks a lot for being here and for your interesting comment.
Well, I guess people are so enamoured by what you write that you are flooded with praise. In fact, I also enjoy reading your posts. But, I try to resist getting swayed by the author's views and look at the issue from another perspective. This is usually the case with me.
DeleteIf we call our society a civilized one, this is plain narcissism. You read newspapers and not a single day passes with news of heinous crimes perpetrated by the members of our society. So, such obnoxious and ostentatious display of celebration is what one can easily expect. Worse, we have a section of society pasting posters on the walls declaring the hanged terrorist as their latest martyr(This happened in the geographical territory of India & not in Pakistan or any other nation).
The point about PM's silence was that silence does not always heal. I think it only preempts the wounds that spoken words are capable of inflicting.
Keep writing in this vein. I'll keep bumbling like this.
Ashwini..What the writer means when she writes something and what the reader gets from it may of course be different. It's like interpreting a painting I guess. I am glad you always have something different to put across...:))
DeleteOh I don't mind at all.... keep humming or buzzing...I thank you for granting me the license to psychologically torture you with my writings :D
Glad you held on to your hat through it all... :))))))
Good to see you here...always :)Thanks!
clean and crisp ..stirred the soul..Actually I wanna write more but my physical condition doesn't permit me to do so.My fever got relapsed..will surely get back to you after I recover completely...
ReplyDeleteOh, how are you feeling now, odyzz...?? Appreciate your being here, my dear. Take care and get well soon!
Deletexoxo. Thanks!
A powerful and a moving poem. "its not a story of a hero but a narrative of a cynic" conveyed the mood of the poem. Very well written. :-)
ReplyDeleteAsh, I am so pleased you liked it. Thanks... :))) Good to have you here after a long time! How have you been...?
Deletexoxo
A very different and valid perspective Panchaliji! Loved reading it :)
ReplyDeleteRajkiran...Wow..!!! Now I am glad you liked it..! :)Thank you. Appreciate your first visit to my space. :)))
DeleteSilence many times just hides the reality - for a while, for those who are not concerned -
ReplyDeleteHowever, the poem is beautiful!
Aativa...May be what you say is correct...and, the debate is never-ending !! I am very pleased to see you on my space. Been long, hasn't it...?
DeleteThanks for coming by... :))
Yea, everyone is just existing, living - reacting to their circumstances. We react mildly while the terrorist with bloodshed. If only we could understand what turns them to such a demon. Maybe life would be much better than today if one lives sticking to the Truth and not circumstances. But it's not easy and then even truth is different for different people.
ReplyDeleteI liked your post. Thoughtful post. All the best for bat.
Megha...I can understand the effort you made to realign your thinking regarding Truth and circumstances. ...It's not easy...True!I am so glad you enjoyed my effort.. Thanks for the visit... :))))
DeleteWow ji. The mind of that disturbed man who had done a kill, one too many a time and now he tries to make peace with the past - it is beautifully etched in your words.
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely the agony one goes through after a series of wrong doings.
Would love to hear from you! Do stop by my blog! *cheers*
Thanks Kappu, for your being here with your appreciative comment. Last night, I read your wonderful blog. Great job...:)
Deletethanks!
I'll not repeat what most other commentors have already done (of which I read only some) - i.e. praise you, though I have some of it as well.
ReplyDeleteInsanity and terrorism, I guess one can put those words as synonyms. You begin with the theme and quickly go onto something else. I don't see "insane" anywhere else in the whole thing--even the very blindungsroman of the ghost is very human like, very sane. Of course, this is only from the point of view of the theme.
"I'm me and my circumstance" - On this note, I feel like sharing something I've been researching lately--"origins of language". This is one of the unsolved problems in science, we are not able to figure out how language originated. One of the most puzzling things in this entire strand of research is how can something like 'Words', which are essentially highly unreliable, ever have caught on. Caught on, so damn well. I share this, 'coz it amuses me to make a jump from this research of mine to the philosophical sophistry that you attempt to put forth--"I'm me and my circumstance" [Words have come such a long way].
I'm not going to research this much (atleast not right now), but kindly allow me query you. What does 'circumstance' imply--the entire context? or a accumulation of all contexts (things) thus far in one's life? I can't bring myself to accept that there is one overwhelming and overpowering single (or a bunch of) 'circumstance'(s) that defines a person; although that's definitely the way a person is perceived [as this insane terrorist of yours, who very sanely repents]
Uknowshree....
DeleteInsanity and terrorism are synonyms . Are they ? Are they defined - as words - from the same context ? Or , do they have independent circumstantial existence ? The answer is yes , a resounding "yes". Bhagat Singh , was he insane ? Would one label him a "terrorist" because he was "insane" ; or the epithet could have been for an altogether different reasons ? He was a hero or a terrorist depending on one's context and ideology. Reverse logic holds good as well. As a matter of fact , linking two words originating from two different circumstances , I understand , was dominant , and I suspect it still is , in western colonial culture. To-day , however , there are challenges to these disciplinary conventions of literary criticism and academic philosophy by focusing on the cultural texts of those people who are often marginalized : the working class , women , the post-colonial subject and the new immigrant. On how I "quickly got into something else" , I could only mention : " That was precisely the point ". I got into something else to avoid tyranny of 'synonyms' ; to examine and posit the words in their proper cultural 'circumstances'. Any attempt to discern the effects of colonial legacies to the way we think about contemporary cultural objects and everyday life needs a very complex language and style. I have neither.Therefore , the verse and the deviation.
Thanks a lot for being here and for your comment.
Na, thanks to you. I firmly believe that there are only two consequences to anything endeavour one undertakes in life: one either Wins or Learns; and either is very acceptable to me. With you, I believe it is going to be mostly of the latter, simply because you have the advantage of time on your side. Note, I used 'mostly'.
DeleteYour poem is narrated by the slain terrorist--I fail to understand (accept) why he/she is speaking within the 'circumstance' of his/her (the "I" goes for a toss here) victims. Yeah, that's a mere POV difference.
Anyway, PEACE. :D
Yes, indeed, I always learn...(how wonderful! Learning/ knowledge/epistemology/epistemic violence...omg, there I go back to my protagonist through textual associataion), and I learn not because of ample redundant time on hand (after all home making is as good as idle bird-watching); one 'learns' to live,to be a 'good human being'also, unknownshree! According to you, "I" went for a toss. I concede. After all, text and the world beyond are always in binary opposition.
DeleteI agree that we should call it a day, but before adios, I refer to some lines from 'The eleventh thesis of Feuerbach'----"The philosophers have only ever interpreted the world, the point however is to change it."
Thanks :D
Congrats on the win Panchali.. And, they've said it all :)
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Great news, SiS !! I am absolutely thrilled....:))Aha...how much I love flaunting that glittering Batom :D:D
DeleteThanks a ton!!
Congratulations panchali! Just read your piece. a truly well deserved win ! very powerful writing
ReplyDeleteThanks a million, justanotherwakeupcall!! Delighted to see you on my space. Been long, hasn't it...?
DeleteThanks for your wishes!! I truly appreciate.:))Do visit again...please!
Congrats :)
ReplyDeleteMegha. Thanks for making me happy...means a lot!! :D
DeleteCongrats, congrats and more congrats!! You deserve much more. A lovely poem, expressing powerful emotions!!
ReplyDeleteUsha, Your compliments put me on Cloud Nine!I am in severe danger of flying off.. do you know the peril you are putting me into...? Awww...thank you so much.
DeleteHugzzz dear friend... you sure know how to make this woman happy...:))) Thanks a zillion....