ASCENT--
Rose tingeing summit
Bearing the rainbow of hope
An alpinist’s treat
Climbing cliff demands
Audacious plans; ambition
Seeks benediction
Flighty butterflies
Take garden under their wings
Drizzle of dancers
With passion-tipped wings
Burning in the morning's flame
Fulfills her moon-dreams
Her breathing quickens
Lighting lilies of prairie
Nectar in belly
Written for Haiku Heights: April-a2z-heights-Day-02-Butterfly
Awesome !! The lines pertaining to butterflies are enchanting. The imagery depicted in the first one is beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteGood to know that you feel good after reading this blog, Usha. Thanks a ton!:)
Delete'Ambition seeks benediction', like this line, meaningful & mesmerizing.
ReplyDeleteYour comment has delighted me, Eashwar! Thank you...
DeleteI'm jealous of you Panchali...how you weave the words! Awesome!
ReplyDeleteDelightful, Panchali. You are a wonderful poet!
ReplyDeletemmm love that second one...i am a sucker for butterflies...also the passion and intimacy you get out of it...
ReplyDeleteambition seeks benediction though is the line that steals the show today...
I enjoyed both. But especially the first one this morning. The picture is phenomenal. It must be such an exciting feeling to take a look at that summit, planning one's ambitious ascent!
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ReplyDeleteWelcome Panchali!
ReplyDeleteThis is another great haiku...
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It does not matter that virtually...
It is important that you know.
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Lucia
Lovely as always Panchali di :)
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly and beautifully done
ReplyDeleteOoh, I really enjoyed the ascent haiku--wonderfully done! :)
ReplyDeletevery lovely and mind-blowing.
ReplyDelete''Drizzle of dancers''
ReplyDeleteWow! that's so beautiful! :)
"Drizzle of dancers" - I loved it !!!
ReplyDeleteI love these romantic butterfly haiku.
ReplyDeletenice to have nectar in the belly
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Awesome haiku! Splendid!!
ReplyDeleteur writings r "Bearing the rainbow of hope" that takes the readers to a cloud nine ..fantastic words..GOD<3U
ReplyDeleteThe words you choose-they are like gems!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteawesome
ReplyDeleteWonderful set of haiku! Enjoyed butterfly ones most! :)
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful lines.
ReplyDeletewhen I come here to reed something, I always amazed that how simple and common word's become a great poem from you. AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG From Harry
ReplyDeleteI am attracted to the following:
ReplyDelete"ambition seeks benediction"
"garden under its wings"
"drizzle of dancers"
"passion-tipped wings"
"Lighting lilies"
"Nectar in belly"
Well you can almost compose another verse with these stupendous lines!!!!
Learning a lot from your writes...
Geetashree
http://panaecea.wordpress.com
Loved the 3rd one!
ReplyDeleteLove the butterfly haiku. The phrases 'drizzle of dancers' and 'nectar in belly' are beautiful.
ReplyDeleteSimply Superb!
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