Tuesday, April 02, 2013

Haiku-


ASCENT--


Rose tingeing summit
Bearing the rainbow of hope
An alpinist’s treat

Climbing cliff demands
Audacious plans; ambition
Seeks benediction

Written for Haiku Heights: april-a2z-heights-day-01-ASCENT





Flighty butterflies
Take garden under their wings
Drizzle of dancers


With passion-tipped wings
Burning in the morning's flame
Fulfills her moon-dreams


Her breathing quickens
Lighting lilies of prairie
Nectar in belly



Written for Haiku Heights:  April-a2z-heights-Day-02-Butterfly

30 comments:

  1. Awesome !! The lines pertaining to butterflies are enchanting. The imagery depicted in the first one is beautiful!!

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    1. Good to know that you feel good after reading this blog, Usha. Thanks a ton!:)

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  2. 'Ambition seeks benediction', like this line, meaningful & mesmerizing.

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    1. Your comment has delighted me, Eashwar! Thank you...

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  3. I'm jealous of you Panchali...how you weave the words! Awesome!

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  4. Delightful, Panchali. You are a wonderful poet!

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  5. mmm love that second one...i am a sucker for butterflies...also the passion and intimacy you get out of it...

    ambition seeks benediction though is the line that steals the show today...

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  6. I enjoyed both. But especially the first one this morning. The picture is phenomenal. It must be such an exciting feeling to take a look at that summit, planning one's ambitious ascent!

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  8. Welcome Panchali!
    This is another great haiku...
    I am very happy to know you...
    It does not matter that virtually...
    It is important that you know.
    Greetings from Polish far.
    Lucia

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  9. Lovely as always Panchali di :)

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  10. Brilliantly and beautifully done

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  11. Ooh, I really enjoyed the ascent haiku--wonderfully done! :)

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  12. Loved the first picture. With great dreams and hopes and passion do we climb up and higher in life!

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  13. very lovely and mind-blowing.

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  14. ''Drizzle of dancers''
    Wow! that's so beautiful! :)

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  15. "Drizzle of dancers" - I loved it !!!

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  16. I love these romantic butterfly haiku.

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  17. Awesome haiku! Splendid!!

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  18. ur writings r "Bearing the rainbow of hope" that takes the readers to a cloud nine ..fantastic words..GOD<3U

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  19. The words you choose-they are like gems!!!!!!

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  20. Wonderful set of haiku! Enjoyed butterfly ones most! :)

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  21. when I come here to reed something, I always amazed that how simple and common word's become a great poem from you. AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG From Harry

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  22. I am attracted to the following:

    "ambition seeks benediction"

    "garden under its wings"

    "drizzle of dancers"

    "passion-tipped wings"

    "Lighting lilies"

    "Nectar in belly"

    Well you can almost compose another verse with these stupendous lines!!!!

    Learning a lot from your writes...

    Geetashree

    http://panaecea.wordpress.com

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  23. Love the butterfly haiku. The phrases 'drizzle of dancers' and 'nectar in belly' are beautiful.

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