Oh, I am also just trying to write haiku--restricted syllable is a big hindrance..:(( Glad I could come up to your expectation...many thanks, asteria!!
Panchali, I was going to say the same thing as Peggy said....you chose wonderful words to describe the scene. I get a very peaceful feeling from your words!
Loved all three panchali ma'm . you have included so many elements of nature, each one described more elegantly than the other, in your haiku. Beautiful ! :)
wonderful set...you have included such vivid personifications and land/water-scapes....
ReplyDeleteJoanne, I am so glad you enjoyed this effort.. Thanks for the visit... :))))
DeleteBeautiful imagery Panchali!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteYou really make me so happy, Indu :) Thank you!
DeleteSo beautiful, Panchali di!! :)
ReplyDeleteAh, thank you, poetess! How are you, mohona?? Thanks for stopping by...
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ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch, Adriana:)
DeleteI love the intriguing word choices here. Wonderful, kiddo!
ReplyDeleteYour comment has delighted me completely, Sherry!!! Many thanks!
Deletei am far from understanding haikus but im learning on a daily basis and must say today i learnt something more.. :)
ReplyDeleteOh, I am also just trying to write haiku--restricted syllable is a big hindrance..:((
DeleteGlad I could come up to your expectation...many thanks, asteria!!
Beautiful imagery!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Mc Guffy!
DeletePainting of wonderful images with a brush of words.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Brudberg for that fantastic comment!! Am mighty pleased :)))))
DeleteThree lovely words picture from the image. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the visit... and the feedback, jrbhaiku... :))
DeleteWonderful word choices here--effective images! Sprint for sure.
ReplyDeleteOh, thanks Peggy, I am very happy that you liked this. Deeply appreciate :))
DeletePanchali, I was going to say the same thing as Peggy said....you chose wonderful words to describe the scene. I get a very peaceful feeling from your words!
ReplyDeleteMary...I am so happy to read your comment!! What a lovely comment...! Thank you so much.. :))Thanks a bunch!!
Delete"Singing birth for Spring"..this is just lovely, Panchali!
ReplyDeleteToo sweet...MM!! Thanks a lot for your encouragement. It's always such a pleasure to have you here!:))
DeletePanchali jee
ReplyDeleteLovely words . Unimaginable for me.
Sloppy moody waves
Pecking flamboyant pebbles
The whispering grass
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Thanks Vishal...:)) You're kind....!!:) A visit to your space is due..shall be there today!
DeleteExcellent writing Panchali ji! Thank you for this wonderful writing. thank's again From Harry
ReplyDeleteThanks Lucky!! Pleasure is mine...completely:)
Deletea lovely play of words..whispering, verbose grass and silent meadows...doesn't it reflect on how we humans are too?
ReplyDeleteThank you, princess ...your words delight me! Yes...those words do reflect on us in many ways!!:)
DeleteLoved the first 3 lines
ReplyDeleteGood to see you here, Rajni. Many thanks!
DeleteBeautiful:) Reminds me of the poem 'The brook'....
ReplyDeleteI am just trying to remember the poem 'the brook'....shall google and read it for sure :)Thanks for your encouragement:)))
DeleteLovely , Wordsworth like ! :)
ReplyDeleteWow....You made my day, Jaish! Thank you.
DeleteIt was like being woken up from a nice dream, Panchali:)
ReplyDeleteAah, how cool is that!! Nature is truly dreamy...Thanks for your precious comment, Rahul. Many thanks!
Deletealoha Panchali - i like the sound of your grass. aloha.
ReplyDeleteALOHA, Rick !! Mahalo nui loa na ho'olaule'a me la kaua!:)
DeleteThird one is so awesome. There is always an other-worldly feel in your writings.
ReplyDeleteI am truly happy that you enjoyed the blog, meenakshi!! Coming from one of the best writers such a comment means a lot to me:)) Thanks a ton!!
DeleteLoved all three panchali ma'm . you have included so many elements of nature, each one described more elegantly than the other, in your haiku. Beautiful ! :)
ReplyDeleteThankyou so much, Maliny...again coming from a writer of your stature, it feels so good... Glad you liked the blog.. Thankyou!!:)))
DeleteBeautiful mam, soothing in this hot and noisy atmosphere.. I loved the 3rd one as well.
ReplyDeleteRegards
Ankita
A piece I wrote
Thanks Ankita!! Welcome to my space...Lovely to see you here :))
DeleteAwesome imagery ! Each word conveys the pure heart of the writer. Simply enchanting !!
ReplyDeleteAwww...Thank you for the lovely words dear Usha:)) You made my day!!! Hugzz
DeleteHow I love this...mountain springs are among my favourite things!
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I ma glad you enjoyed, K. Thanks so much!:)
Deletevery nice..
ReplyDeleteThank you, JD!!:)
DeleteMany thanks, Lisa...:))
ReplyDelete...sigh...lovely...
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Poet L:))
DeleteProfound! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Akanksha :))
DeleteWonderful again.........
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Kenfolios
Glad you approved of it, Debopam!:)
Deleteha...what a cool way of putting it...gurgling in glory...smiles...i like that much....there is much joy again in spring....lovely piece....
ReplyDeleteBrian...Thank you so much...!! coming from a poet of your caliber this means a lot to me... thanks a lot:))))
DeleteSmiles.
Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Rajesh!!
DeletePANCHALI !!!
ReplyDeleteVERY NICE...
Beautiful poem!
Lucia
Lucia!!!So sweet of you to mention it:)) Thank you, lots...:)))
DeleteOh, Mommy likes it!
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Lily Belle
Thanks for all your good thoughts and prayers.
Oh, thanks Lily Belle....hope you guys are doing well now. Great having you here. Say thanks to Mommy....Mawgli sends wags to both of you:D
DeleteYou know so many profound words :) I wish I knew at least a few of them :) lovely!!
ReplyDeleteFIF..You are kind. Thanks for the encouragement, my dear. xoxo
DeleteI'm assuming this was taken in the monsoon season?
ReplyDelete-Neeraj
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The pic is not mine...from the net, Neeraj!! Thanks for stopping by...
DeleteWill you believe me if I said I could feel all that you wrote??
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awwwiiii...So sweet of you to mention it, ME!!:)) Many many thanks!!
DeleteAshwini, Thank you so much.. lovely to have your presence here and your very motivating comment..:))))
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