Monday, March 18, 2013

Mountain Spring





Stream ebbs languidly
Along ridges and valleys
Singing birth of spring

Sloppy moody waves
Pecking flamboyant pebbles
Gurgle in glory

The whispering grass
Perpetually verbose
In silent meadows





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76 comments:

  1. wonderful set...you have included such vivid personifications and land/water-scapes....

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    1. Joanne, I am so glad you enjoyed this effort.. Thanks for the visit... :))))

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  2. Beautiful imagery Panchali!!!!!!

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    1. You really make me so happy, Indu :) Thank you!

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  3. So beautiful, Panchali di!! :)

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    1. Ah, thank you, poetess! How are you, mohona?? Thanks for stopping by...

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  4. I love the intriguing word choices here. Wonderful, kiddo!

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    1. Your comment has delighted me completely, Sherry!!! Many thanks!

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  5. i am far from understanding haikus but im learning on a daily basis and must say today i learnt something more.. :)

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    1. Oh, I am also just trying to write haiku--restricted syllable is a big hindrance..:((
      Glad I could come up to your expectation...many thanks, asteria!!

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  6. Painting of wonderful images with a brush of words.

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    1. Thanks a lot, Brudberg for that fantastic comment!! Am mighty pleased :)))))

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  7. Three lovely words picture from the image. Thank you.

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    1. Thank you for the visit... and the feedback, jrbhaiku... :))

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  8. Wonderful word choices here--effective images! Sprint for sure.

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    1. Oh, thanks Peggy, I am very happy that you liked this. Deeply appreciate :))

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  9. Panchali, I was going to say the same thing as Peggy said....you chose wonderful words to describe the scene. I get a very peaceful feeling from your words!

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    1. Mary...I am so happy to read your comment!! What a lovely comment...! Thank you so much.. :))Thanks a bunch!!

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  10. "Singing birth for Spring"..this is just lovely, Panchali!

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    1. Too sweet...MM!! Thanks a lot for your encouragement. It's always such a pleasure to have you here!:))

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  11. Panchali jee
    Lovely words . Unimaginable for me.

    Sloppy moody waves
    Pecking flamboyant pebbles
    The whispering grass

    Travel India

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    1. Thanks Vishal...:)) You're kind....!!:) A visit to your space is due..shall be there today!

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  12. Excellent writing Panchali ji! Thank you for this wonderful writing. thank's again From Harry

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    1. Thanks Lucky!! Pleasure is mine...completely:)

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  13. a lovely play of words..whispering, verbose grass and silent meadows...doesn't it reflect on how we humans are too?

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    1. Thank you, princess ...your words delight me! Yes...those words do reflect on us in many ways!!:)

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    1. Good to see you here, Rajni. Many thanks!

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  15. Beautiful:) Reminds me of the poem 'The brook'....

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    1. I am just trying to remember the poem 'the brook'....shall google and read it for sure :)Thanks for your encouragement:)))

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  16. Lovely , Wordsworth like ! :)

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    1. Wow....You made my day, Jaish! Thank you.

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  17. It was like being woken up from a nice dream, Panchali:)

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    1. Aah, how cool is that!! Nature is truly dreamy...Thanks for your precious comment, Rahul. Many thanks!

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  18. aloha Panchali - i like the sound of your grass. aloha.

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    1. ALOHA, Rick !! Mahalo nui loa na ho'olaule'a me la kaua!:)

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  19. Third one is so awesome. There is always an other-worldly feel in your writings.

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    1. I am truly happy that you enjoyed the blog, meenakshi!! Coming from one of the best writers such a comment means a lot to me:)) Thanks a ton!!

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  20. Loved all three panchali ma'm . you have included so many elements of nature, each one described more elegantly than the other, in your haiku. Beautiful ! :)

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    1. Thankyou so much, Maliny...again coming from a writer of your stature, it feels so good... Glad you liked the blog.. Thankyou!!:)))

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  21. Beautiful mam, soothing in this hot and noisy atmosphere.. I loved the 3rd one as well.

    Regards
    Ankita
    A piece I wrote

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    1. Thanks Ankita!! Welcome to my space...Lovely to see you here :))

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  22. Awesome imagery ! Each word conveys the pure heart of the writer. Simply enchanting !!

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    1. Awww...Thank you for the lovely words dear Usha:)) You made my day!!! Hugzz

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  23. How I love this...mountain springs are among my favourite things!
    K

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    1. I ma glad you enjoyed, K. Thanks so much!:)

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  24. One can never get enough of appreciating nature, can we? The silent meadows and the pebbles' gurle, Wonderfully written :-)

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    1. Ashwini, Thank you so much.. lovely to have your presence here and your very motivating comment..:))))

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    1. Thank you so much, Akanksha :))

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    1. Glad you approved of it, Debopam!:)

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  27. ha...what a cool way of putting it...gurgling in glory...smiles...i like that much....there is much joy again in spring....lovely piece....

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    1. Brian...Thank you so much...!! coming from a poet of your caliber this means a lot to me... thanks a lot:))))
      Smiles.

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  28. PANCHALI !!!
    VERY NICE...
    Beautiful poem!
    Lucia

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    1. Lucia!!!So sweet of you to mention it:)) Thank you, lots...:)))

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  29. Oh, Mommy likes it!

    Hugs,
    Lily Belle

    Thanks for all your good thoughts and prayers.

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    1. Oh, thanks Lily Belle....hope you guys are doing well now. Great having you here. Say thanks to Mommy....Mawgli sends wags to both of you:D

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  30. You know so many profound words :) I wish I knew at least a few of them :) lovely!!

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    1. FIF..You are kind. Thanks for the encouragement, my dear. xoxo

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  31. I'm assuming this was taken in the monsoon season?

    -Neeraj
    http://www.bharari.net

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    1. The pic is not mine...from the net, Neeraj!! Thanks for stopping by...

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  32. Will you believe me if I said I could feel all that you wrote??

    :)

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    1. awwwiiii...So sweet of you to mention it, ME!!:)) Many many thanks!!

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