Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Plash ~

As light turns softer, fuzzier
Elements of awareness interspersed with nature
   come crashing with a click of luck
 It leads me, I follow
I search for things that I have lost
The ball of Gold bares its 180-degrees view
and fires my eyes     hacks me,
   -Tethers me to the surrounding garden
I breathe slowly, absorbing the grandeur
All I hear is the soothing sound of water 
 gushing, falling lavishly in swirls 
through the gardener's hosepipe    
Free...buoyant... beautiful
Wind beats up 
 the green scent of coolness, freshness.. 
 I fall prey to nature's magic


  1. Nothing more beautiful and soothing than a garden - especially when there is also the sound of water.

  2. Nice. You captured the moment/experience with all the senses allowing us to appreciate the moment as well. Looking into that gold ball is pretty cool. I find myself mezmerized at times when I am given a chance to look into a metallic surface like that.

  3. the poem has a soothing touch that makes one Aware of the great beauty surrounding well penned Panchali di....

  4. I love the life you have described for us (there if we look) - yes it is refreshing and revitalizing

  5. The beauty of mother nature leaves one awestruck :D
    Beautifully executed :D

    Lots of love,

  6. Wow! What a beautiful image you have painted! This is lovely :)

  7. I enjoyed the details that you shared. I felt like I was right there in the garden with you.

  8. And it's a magical write you have made of it.

  9. To absorb the beauty inside ah!!! beautiful

  10. Sounds like a great garden to visit.

  11. I love that feeling of being immersed in beauty. Your poem is soothing and beautiful.

  12. This is just the kind of magic that tethers me, too! So beautiful!

  13. Gardens and nature at work is indeed very relaxing.


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