Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Plash ~



As light turns softer, fuzzier
Elements of awareness interspersed with nature
   come crashing with a click of luck
 It leads me, I follow
I search for things that I have lost
The ball of Gold bares its 180-degrees view
and fires my eyes     hacks me,
   -Tethers me to the surrounding garden
I breathe slowly, absorbing the grandeur
All I hear is the soothing sound of water 
 gushing, falling lavishly in swirls 
through the gardener's hosepipe    
Free...buoyant... beautiful
Wind beats up 
 the green scent of coolness, freshness.. 
 I fall prey to nature's magic



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13 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue Sky8/12/15, 9:40 PM

    Nothing more beautiful and soothing than a garden - especially when there is also the sound of water.

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  2. X8/12/15, 10:13 PM

    Nice. You captured the moment/experience with all the senses allowing us to appreciate the moment as well. Looking into that gold ball is pretty cool. I find myself mezmerized at times when I am given a chance to look into a metallic surface like that.

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  3. Sumana Roy8/12/15, 11:05 PM

    the poem has a soothing touch that makes one Aware of the great beauty surrounding us...so well penned Panchali di....

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  4. Unknown8/12/15, 11:08 PM

    I love the life you have described for us (there if we look) - yes it is refreshing and revitalizing

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  5. Sanaa Rizvi8/12/15, 11:14 PM

    The beauty of mother nature leaves one awestruck :D
    Beautifully executed :D

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  6. Purba chakraborty8/12/15, 11:42 PM

    Wow! What a beautiful image you have painted! This is lovely :)

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  7. Mary8/13/15, 2:57 AM

    I enjoyed the details that you shared. I felt like I was right there in the garden with you.

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  8. Rosemary Nissen-Wade8/13/15, 4:58 AM

    And it's a magical write you have made of it.

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  9. Vandana Sharma8/13/15, 3:43 PM

    To absorb the beauty inside ah!!! beautiful

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  10. Gen Giggles 8/13/15, 6:46 PM

    Sounds like a great garden to visit.

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  11. Myrna R.8/13/15, 7:41 PM

    I love that feeling of being immersed in beauty. Your poem is soothing and beautiful.

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  12. Hannah8/14/15, 5:22 AM

    This is just the kind of magic that tethers me, too! So beautiful!

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  13. Old Egg8/14/15, 11:57 AM

    Gardens and nature at work is indeed very relaxing.

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