Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Everything Begins Again~



Life puzzles and fuzzes
when Love is misused
The broken heart
Swallowing layers and layers of void
Creates a vault of bigger abyss!
And the world ceases---all appears to end.
But,.... life begins again
Like stars that rise when the other has set
--- life beckons with a smile once again
The germ of life is hidden in void-
pick the seed, transplant it; and climb out of the abyss!!
Life's brief; it's meaning briefer
Sometimes... love wins...else, frees all ties
But, life moves on ...and lives
Hence, gripping the time in hands
one must must never sink-
Life puddles have no depth
Soothe the crazy pulse of hate...re-shape life.
Thrust yourself forward...the race is long!
Let the darkness leave
Rise...when all that's bright has left
Let tune of hope lend a light
Live on and on...Love again
Love is a blessing.



Written for the prompt  Wake Up and Love 
http://poetryjaam.blogspot.in/ Carry On
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90 comments:

  1. Thought provoking ma'm. It takes great courage to let go and start afresh. But then, do we have another option? The earlier the realization dawns the better.

    wonderfully penned too as usual:)

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    1. “When I let go of what I am, I become what I might be.” ~Lao Tzu
      So, that's the only option we have...not easy to start, as you said, maliny.
      Thanks a bunch for the inspiring comment. xoxo

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  2. If people can't love, at least they can try to understand!

    Love is becoming more and more difficult in our times.

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    1. Matheikal...I understand the claustrophobia of being in a space where people do not understand, the anxiety of being in a place we do not feel to be in...but, c'est la vie!! :((
      Thanks a lot for stopping by...

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  3. every end is an indication of another beginning so rightly portrayed .. love alive and rest dead !! you are just amazing !!!

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    1. c'est la vie!! So move on--that's what fills us with expectations for the future. Thanks a bunch, mysay :))) Good to see you always! :D

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  4. A beautiful, uplifting poem, when all else fails there is always love.

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    1. Stepping out into light is therapeutic always...love has strength! Thanks a ton, Lisa for your encouragement :)

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  5. Great uplifting poem mam...True that, it's love that makes life worth living..re-living...worries, hatred and everything else are mere spur in the vast ocean of life, prodding one to move forward...shouldn't be taken as a spot to hault , for moving is life :)

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    1. Sadia...How beautifully you delved deeper into the range of emotions--wow! Thanks for that beautiful comment...you made my day!

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  6. Hi Panchali, This is an awesome poem. It is thoughtful and inspiring. You have penned the spirit of optimism I loved the lines
    Like stars that rise when the other has set
    --- life beckons with a smile once again
    The germ of life is hidden in void-

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    1. Hi Usha, Thank you for that encouragement. You made my day...:))) Since I was traveling, I have missed out quite a few blogs, ...shall be reading them all in my own pace. Shall visit your space soon :)
      Thanks a ton!

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  7. I like the way you expressed the life puddles have no depth. So true. They may be wide but are not deep, and eventually they will evaporate. Hopefully most people ARE resilient and will find a way to live on and love on despite the hard knocks, difficult times, and 'puddles' one is forced to endure! Hope you had pleasant travels, Panchali!!

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    1. Mary,Dealing effectively with our difficulties and problems requires appropriate emotional control, acceptance of realities...one must learn to endure and cross such 'puddles'!!

      To win that kind of comment from you has made my day... I too wait eagerly for you to comment... thank you...:))Thanks a lot, Mary for being here :))
      Yes, we had a great holiday, Mary. Thanks.

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  8. A poem that encourages and offers hope - very well expressed! I felt uplifted after reading this.

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    1. Sherri...Thanks... I am happy that I came up to your expectations.. Glad, this inspired you..Thank you for being here:))

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  9. This is so encouraging... it would also fit Poetry Jam's Carry On prompt perfectly.

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    1. Thanks Laurie for the suggestion. I linked up the poem with PJ's prompt just now..:)))Thank you!

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  10. YES, WE SHOULD LIVE LIFE TO ITS FULLEST, WITHOUT ANY REGRETS.

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    1. Thanks Vandana..:))
      Yes...This I can believe, by all means, life should be lived without regrets!

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    2. :))) Thanks Laurie for coming back :)

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  11. The germ of life is hidden in void-is a really cool line in this...life, like nature and the seasons comes around you know....we just have to stick around long enough...love as well...what is our blackest day will be a memory in the light of a new love...

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    1. Brian...I am glad my poem did not disappoint you...we can't avoid sufferings, our only choice is to bear, overcome them and live joyfully:)))
      And how beautifully you said,'our blackest day will be a memory in the light of a new love..."--that's truly positive thinking!
      Thanks a lot for being here :)

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  12. Yes, life carries on. Lots of creative expression here!

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    1. Thank you, Peggy. Glad you enjoyed :))

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  13. Rise...when all that's bright has left
    Let tune of hope lend a light
    Live on and on...

    this is a wonderful song for the voice to sing.

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    1. andrea, I wish I had words to convey my pleasure at seeing you here. Your comment is most cherished... :))Many thanks!

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  14. Panchali, I so love this poem. Especially "rise when all that's bright has left". Brilliant!

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    1. Sherry!! Your comment is most cherished... :))Thanks for the encouragement:))

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  15. I think what I love most about this poem is its relentless optimism - something we all need when confronted with life's 'puddles' and emotional disappointments. Great attitude, Panchali!

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    1. That was a delightful comment, Susan...! Thank you for your words of praise... I am happy you liked the piece... :))

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  16. one must must never sink- Great line and full of truth. Makes me want to smile and enjoy. Great feelings.

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    1. Thank you soooo much, alan.... I am glad you liked this...:)))

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  17. Very motivating and inspiring Panchaliji :)

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    1. Bushra!!! Thank you for your words of praise... I am happy you liked the piece... :))

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  18. Welcome Panchali!
    This is another very nice poem!
    Love is the meaning of our lives ... Well, it would be worth if we did not love.
    I send greetings from distant Polish.
    Regards:)
    Lucia

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    1. Thank you, Lucia..! You've made my day... your comment has thrilled me to my toes...
      Greetings from India!
      xoxo

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  19. Good one, makes lot of sense.

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    1. Thanks a lot, Rajesh. Glad you agree... :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Rosemary!:)

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  21. Very good1 ..when everything fail in life love help us. We have to keep hope..!!! You wriiten very well mam.. Keep writing do visit my blog once...!!!

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    1. Ajnabi...That was a delightful comment...! Thank you for your words of praise.
      I shall be on your space soon. Have been traveling...hence, have a lot to catch up...:)
      Thanks:))

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  22. Loved it...inspirational...especially loved the line " one must must never sink". Thanks you for such a wonderful post.

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    1. Thank you for your constant support, Ranjana. Glad you enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks a lot!:)

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  23. Love love it is. That is all we have and need for life to germinate, bloom and move on...if it hadn't been for love, life would never have seen light

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    1. Thank you soooo much, Akila.... I am glad you liked this and can agree with it...:)))

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  24. Very Inspiring poem............. lovely words used

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    1. Thanks for coming by, Lasha... hope to see you here more often... :))))

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  25. Beautiful poem emanating positivity

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    1. Deepak, I was waiting for your comment... so, I am pleased.... :))))
      Thanks a lot!

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  26. So beautiful. Love the optimism portrayed here. Very uplifting. :)

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    1. Akshay, I wish I had words to convey my pleasure at seeing you here. Your comment is most cherished... :))
      Thanks so much!

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  27. Very motivating lines!! "The germ of life is hidden in void-
    pick the seed, transplant it; and climb out of the abyss!!"
    Loved the way you expressed it, very inspiring!

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    1. Your presence here has thrilled me. Thanks... Valli:))

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  28. Truly love is the only emotion that keeps us going, against all odds to fight for our dreams & give us the strength to move forward with a smile. I really missed your writings Mam, was a bit busy these past 2 months but now I'll be regular :D :) Take care !

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    1. You were surely missed...Great to have you back again, Tanya.:)) Thanks for that lovely comment...

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  29. Eternal truth,couched so beautifully.Setbacks & disappointments are mere guide posts on this road of life.

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    1. You wrapped up so well...,Indu. Thanks...Your presence here has thrilled me once again:))
      Thank you.

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  30. There is so much of maturity in those lines Panchali di. Feel Good poem :)

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    1. Thanks for the wonderful compliment, jaish...visit to your blog is overdue. Shall be there soon:)

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  31. Rousing and chock full of inspiration ,,, I enjoyed your poem.

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    1. Glad you enjoyed, Helen. I am honored:) Thanks a bunch!

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  32. What to write! all the words for comment might have been used by all these viewers.Very(3) thoughtful,Panchali. So let life roll on and roll on because only one life.

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    1. Your presence is enough to make me happy. Thank you for thoese kind words..am elated, Latha :)

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  33. Panchali,

    A poem brimming with the ups and downs of life, yet always suspended and carried by love, even in the depths of despair. One can find a way to move onwards.
    A very full account of the life of love....

    Eileen:)

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    1. Thank you, Eileen...What a lovely comment..! I am so glad you took the trouble to read it so well..as always:)) I appreciate your effort and feel honored :))Many thanks!!

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  34. I love it when love wins. I enjoyed the strength in this...'thrust yourself forward'...'rise'...wonderful encouragement there!

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    1. Coming from you, this is a very gratifying compliment, Poet Laundry. Thanks so much... :)))

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  35. I love the optimism in your words! Thank goodness in life "when all appears to end", life can begin again. Brings new hope to each day.

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    1. So pleased you liked it, Robyn....! Thank you.... :))))

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  36. Such an encouraging read. Love the tone and intent.

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2013/04/25/silence/

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    1. Glad you enjoyed, Kim. Thanks a ton!:)

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  37. Deep, poignant and charged with emotion. Life's brief; Its meaning briefer...that makes me think.

    Geetashree

    http://panaecea.wordpress.com

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    1. Geetashree, Spoken like a TRUE philosopher. Thanks for the compliments:)

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  38. Uplifting, encouraging and inspiring poem.
    Live on and on... Love again....
    Love is indeed a blessing.

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    1. Welcome to my space, Harshad. Thanks for your kind words. Hope to see you more on these pages :))
      Thank you!

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  39. A lot of meaning in those words Panchali:)

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  40. this one has got a powerful flow.... nice didi!

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  41. We have to have the courage to make things right. One wrong act doesn't end life. Beautiful poem.

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  42. Indeed! Love the streak of positivity that emanates throughout..

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