Li'l pages get pretty
as a reflective mind lurks
jump straight up, in air
Tinge caught in feathers
like life, evolves in my hands
sparks fire on a shelf
Wrinkled predator
Perched closely on hands of prey
Loathes resurrection
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Origami.
Wrinkled predator --- Origami is a beautiful art !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Speck. Yes, it is a beautiful art, but tricky! So, is hailu..especially the syllable counting part!:)
Deletewith words u drew a lovely picture:)Happy MahaShivarathri Blessings..GOD<3U
ReplyDeleteThanks Ashi, for that lovely comment. May lord Shiva bless you!:)
DeleteThird one is naughty, paper predator perched on the hand of prey. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteHahaha..Meenakshi! He has a huge ego!! :)Thanks re..
DeleteBeautiful set ma'am ! I loved the 2nd one most :)
ReplyDeleteValli...that was an absolutely wonderful prompt. Thanks for the idea! And I read your beautiful set!
DeleteThanks for the encouragement.:))
Oh my,this is really hard.
ReplyDeleteGive it a shot, Indu...Even I am learning! Haiku is revered for its simplicity...but, it's not easy to cut words/phrases and keep within the barrier of 17 syllables. One day, I shall be an expert...hopefully! LOL!
DeleteWell written!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Stephen!
Delete"hues caught in feathers" is a lovely line! Creative art of origami reflected in creative words of haikus, nicely written.
ReplyDeleteOh, so good to see you here after ages, Zunnur. Glad you enjoyed....thanks a lot!
DeleteThis is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton, Lisa!:)
DeletePanchali, I welcome you very warmly.
ReplyDeleteI admire the beautiful origami.
Great post.
I send greetings from Polish far.
Lucia
Thank you, Lucia!! It is always such a pleasure to have you here. Thanks for the compliments!!
DeleteGreetings!!
Lots of love,
Panchali
Nice art. First one is more interesting!
ReplyDeleteThanks Abhinav!
DeleteHappy Shivratri to you and family.Panchali the haiku is superb.I loved the line 'hues caught in 'feathers like life".The depth of these words is unfathomable!1
ReplyDeleteMay the almighty Lord Shiva bless you and your family with good things and perfect health, Usha! Thanks for that stupendous compliment...means so much!!:))
DeleteThanks a bunch!
lovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks Adriana :)
DeleteI love this!! Your creativity never ceases to surprise me. Well done, Panchali!
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading it, MM and for ranking it so high. Coming from a prolific writer...this is quite encouraging...!! Thanks a bunch!
DeleteSimply beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThis is so encouraging,Mary. Thanks a lot :).
DeleteBeautiful, Panchali. You bring them to life.
ReplyDeleteGlad that you liked me creating those haiku moments!:D Thanks a ton!:)
DeleteLovely Panchali
ReplyDeleteThanks Vishal....:)
DeleteBeautiful words for an equally beautiful art! Together - IT is creating magic :)
ReplyDeleteArti,... a praise from you is very humbling. Thank you so much. :)
DeleteThis is lovely..:-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Nagini so much!!
DeleteI love the Life given to the origami tiger. Super!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed, Meoww...Ahh, being a meoww...I am sure, you must have heard 'the egotist' purring!:P hahaha...
DeleteThanks!!
"Li'l pages get pretty" Ahha!! I love paper art.
ReplyDeleteTruly a reflective mind yearns for new shapes to be folded into. Btw I know paper roses. Here's my contribution to your origami creation @}--- ;)Loved all the three. :)
Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)
Surbhi, thank you so much for appreciation. I read your take on the white paper this afternoon! You've an awesome reflective mind...so love ya more n more, dotty!! Thanksss...:)
DeleteWhat an imagination :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing! :) There is depth in those words!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Akanksha for letting me know that you liked the themes. :)Your understanding is amazing :) Thanks!
Deletei loved the second one most...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks asteria....so you love birds..huh? Good to have you here always!:))
DeleteThese were fun to read and I love the art that went with them!
ReplyDeleteYes, so much depth and meaning in your words!
<3 it
Ella...This theme was 'high fantasy', and I couldn't resist...thanks for reading this so well:))
DeleteThanks a bunch!
Beautiful work.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rajesh for the appreciation!:)
DeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Managua:))
DeleteThank you, mukhtiar!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, second one is terrific, like an artist speaking her mind.
ReplyDeleteGreat!You definitely made me happy with this terrific feedback, Saru!! Thanks a ton!
DeleteWonderful set of haiku. The last one is my favourite.
ReplyDeleteCheers!
Gracy
www.gracydsouza.com
Thank you, Gracy!! To like that egotist, you ought to be an animal lover!!:)Smiles
DeleteWonderful choice of words!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Deepak!:)
DeletePanchaliDi, a small token of love for you HERE
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Apala...I am honored:)))
DeleteI like the magic, sparking fire in the shelf ~
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely gratified to have you come and read this,Heaven. Thanks for your appreciation...means a lot to me :))
DeleteCharismatic Origami..and simplistic charm in your haiku..What a wonderful combo!!
ReplyDeleteWow...I was waiting for your comment, Odyzz....thanks a lot, my dear ♥
DeleteUm So, so honoured ,Di..You just made my day..Love u ..**Hugz**
DeleteHugz back, Odyzz..:) I am so pleased!
DeleteBeautifully written Panchaliji:) Just love the second and third one so much!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bushra!!:) Last one is my fave too:D
Deleteloved each one of them ...so much of depth in each .. so meaningful
ReplyDeleteThank you, TTT!! Thanks for the encouragement...
Deletevery nicely described.....with da pics
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nandini.
Deleteyou bring the predator alive...awesum :))
ReplyDeleteReally...hahaha...that fellow has a big ego :D Thanks Karan!:)
Deleteas beautiful and crisp as the paper creations themselves!:)
ReplyDeleteOh, that's such a lovely comment...beautifully said, Akila:)
DeleteVery creative work! Lovely lines for them.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Indrani !!:))
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DeleteYour hands and mind are
ReplyDeletevery creative.
We admire graciously.
Welcome to my space, rudraprayaga!! Thanks for that stupendous comment....You made my day!Hope to see you more on these pages :)
DeleteI love the wrinkled predator.
ReplyDeleteI loved that fellow too, McGuffy Ann:)Thanks for stopping by..
DeleteThose fish are so colorful and pretty!!
ReplyDeleteThey are ...Roshni!:)
DeleteI somehow love the way the word Origami sounds! :)
ReplyDelete:))
Deletepretty cool on the origami...was just teaching some to my son last night....cranes and throwing stars...smiles.
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