In treasured richness
Night arrives
Waltz in the cloud
in sublimity....
In it's own innocence
Disintegrates ...
without struggle
Swims up gently
Against the caramel sky.
Night arrives
Waltz in the cloud
in sublimity....
In it's own innocence
Disintegrates ...
without struggle
Swims up gently
Against the caramel sky.
Penumbra of darkness
Outlives its ambit
Shaken…
mystified...
mystified...
flickering in delirium,
hardens
heightens
naked silhouettes...
beautiful image captured... fantastic...
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja...I am delighted!!
DeleteOh Wow.. Panchali Mam, you have described the arrival and spread of night in a beautiful and romantic kind of way.. really loved the way you concluded it.. naked silhouettes.. WOW.
ReplyDeletedeepak..Your words of appreciation are truly encouraging.. thank you..:)) :)))
DeleteNow this one requires a lot of thinking!
ReplyDeleteHmmmm....think...think...Looking forward to reading you, Indu... :))Thanks!!
DeleteI agree with Indu..I had to read it many times to find the meanings and then put the meanings in place and get the essence of it. And need some thinking to fully understand what you are trying to say
DeleteFiF....Ah, Looks like I kind of butchered it... this time :)))) Ah well... one lives and learns... :)))
DeleteThanks re...
Agree with Indu and Latha! An exercise in mental aerobics but enjoyed this different kind of petry, Panchali!!
DeleteOuch...Et tu, Brute?
DeleteArghh...it only suggests my dull intellect. But, be a good friend and bear with me, as I keep writing:D Thanks Rahul! :)
The beautiful picture complements your amazing words..loved it.. :)
ReplyDeleteodyzz...That was the best compliment you could have paid me...:))thanks!
DeleteThe pleasure is all mine ,Maám...
Deletehmmm..The young man( Sir) in your new pic can be none other than your life partner..Iff I am right, then both of you are "complementing each other to make a wonderful,blessed couple " ..Made for each other..God bless...I wanted to say something more but I have already taken too much of liberty ...:)
Odyzz...Don't worry, my dear!... you came in at the right time....and brightened up our sky...Yaay!!! Our 33rd Anniversary is just round the corner. Thanks for the wishes, sweetie :)))
Deleteyayyy!! party time...dancing time ..:) Di ,When are you going to cross another milestone of married life ?
Delete:)))
DeleteAaah...I am waiting to celebrate the glories of Grand-mothering! Donno when my stupid dotty is going to make me a grandmarvelous Grandmother!:)
I'm waiting to reach this ultimate milestone, Odyzz... :(
The poem shows your romance with the language! Superb! Superb!! Superb!!!
ReplyDeleteAwwwie...Meenakshi..I am glad an avid reader like you liked it... :))) thank you...thank you!
DeleteAnd congrats on your Blog-a-tonic batom!:)) So happy for you:D
I confess I needed to look up the meaning of a couple of words to understand the poem in entirety, but your class is undeniable. Top-notch. Very beautifully written once again. :)
ReplyDeleteAkshay...You are being modest... but, your comment has put me on cloud nine...I kinda like the view from here... :))
DeleteThanks a ton!:)
Oh you meant 'disintegRates'!
ReplyDeleteOh yes...thanks for the correction, Chhavi. I hope I will see more of you on these pages... :)))Thank you.
DeleteI like the descriptions and texture of the night ~
ReplyDeleteMy share: http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.ca/2013/01/naked-under-moon.html
Heaven...Thanks a lot for visiting my space and for the feedback. I do appreciate.
DeleteI shall be in your space soon...:)
What a beautiful composition... loved the way the pic added more beauty to the entire poem!
ReplyDeleteMe!! Happy to see you here... always. Thanks for coming by... :))))
DeleteBeautiful picture. Glad to know I wasn't alone in having to look up some of the words!
ReplyDeleteThank you Robyn...Blessed are they who are humble... :))
DeleteNice poem... you're gifted.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Karen. Thanks for coming by... :))
DeleteGreat and interesting post. I like it.
ReplyDeleteI also invite you to my blog. ;)
Yours. Have a nice day.
You can also find me on the fanpage and keep track of my work:
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Thank you, Patrycja...! :))
DeleteI'll be in your space soon :)You have a nice day too!! Thanks!
A truly lovely write. I always enjoy it when I find a new poem of yours!
ReplyDeleteAh, thank you, Mary! You just don't know how much you've blessed me with your kind words! I have to admit, it's an honor to have your support!...Thank you, my friend. You made my day once again... today...:)))
DeleteThe night does come in very gracefully. How beautifully you describe the entry!
ReplyDeleteAww...I am so proud of you Divya, thank you for making me feel happy :)xoxo
DeleteWhat a rich and beautiful night you paint. Loved the imagery throughout.
ReplyDeleteThank you, The Write Girl... I am glad that you liked it... AND its a pleasure to see you here... :))))
DeleteI loved the way night arrives in the poem..and then, "flickering in delirium" What an imagination! :)
ReplyDeleteMeoww...I'll hold on this :) You have been an inspiration to so many.. !! Thanks girl:)
DeleteBeautiful poem!! and lovely picture <3
ReplyDeleteI love silhouette photography a lot!
Valli...you're such an inspiration to everyone!:) Thank you.
DeleteEven I LOVE silhouette pics, but this one is from the net..not mine :)
In treasured richness of the night naken silhouttes!
ReplyDeletewonderful lines Panchali Di!!:)
Novel...
Thank you so much, Novel... you made my day...:)))
DeleteSplendid imagery and marvelous treatment of descending it into tangible!!
ReplyDeleteI loved it Panchali:)
Amit, Thanks for coming by... and for the thumbs up....AND its a pleasure to see you here... :))))!!
Deletefreshly beautiful -amazingly composed
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinisha...good to see you after a long time!!:))
DeleteThere is something called third dimension... in which people disappear though they exist...
ReplyDeletehere yours view, readers view and I see the poetry as that third dimension.
Bow.
Thank you, Sathish for the metaphorical comment...Wow! But...let me admit, I was shocked initially when I read 'people disappear though they exist' as 'people disappear through the exit'---LOL...Thank God, I re-read it, and my patient understanding make me sooo happy now :))
DeleteGlad you enjoyed the story, despite the hole ...Keep that 3D spectacle on, my friend!!:))))
A big thanks for such a stupendous comment!!
Hi Panchali Ji,
ReplyDeleteIt's always a pleasure to read your posts. A simple prompt of naked bursts out into a poetic rhythm of words and imagery. A very good take on the prompt.
On the lookout for similar works like these. :)
Regards
Jay
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Your visit and comment have delighted me, Jay. Thank you!!
Deletewow ! yet another masterpiece...
ReplyDeleteTTT....Thanks for the visit... it thrills me each time.. :)))))
DeleteA lot to think about in this one for srue
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Bikram,
DeletePoint taken... let me see if I can push myself next time...))
Good to see you here... at last... :))))
This is just awesome..I liked the first lines really a lot
ReplyDeletethecolorsofmysoul...Your appreciation has made my day. So glad you liked this piece... :))) Thanks...
DeleteWould love to see more of you here!
It's her who knows all our secrets.
ReplyDelete...as the souls come out to play!:) Thanks Purba..
DeleteVery creative.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Rajesh!:)
Deletelove the thought of the night "disintegrating" and swimming up against the sky...how cleverly described!
ReplyDeletePrincess...coming from you, that's a huge compliment.Thank you!!:)
DeleteMulti sensory workout! Cool!
ReplyDeleteAh, thank you, Deepak!:)
DeleteAbsolutely lovely Panchali di and advanced Happy Anniversary to you :)
ReplyDeleteJaish... it is always such a pleasure to have you here!!Thanks for your encouragement...and thank you, once again for your good wishes for our Anniversary..I am moved...:)))
DeleteWith blessings!
Delightful poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and romantic.
I like poetry. I read it often.
Power kisses and greetings from distant Polish.
Lucia
Thank you, Lucia. Yes... patient understanding moves life. I am very happy that you liked this.Thanks a ton!:)
DeleteA big hug and greetings from India!
I'm not so sure whether I grasped the feeling in the exact sense but the lines are lovely. :)
ReplyDeleteSorry about the confusion, Saru...Don't worry, you are not the only one!! This was an attempt to demonstrate how night melts into inky sky pricked by diamonds....and the state of mind of a person who is looking at a landscape…:) I'm glad you liked those lines, despite the obvious flaws. ....!! Thank you...
DeleteNo flaws, I was not sure whether I understood what you portrayed so beautifully. After reading your comment I know I was on the right lines. Thanks for the explanation. :)
DeleteSaru, Thanks for your words of encouragement... you make me feel so good... really you do:)
DeleteThanks, Debopam:)
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