Walking towards horizon,
sludge squelching underfoot;
My conscience coax me to
seeing something
     
 -wondrous are nature's sights- an eerie calm descends; 
A movement among the pebbles;
running of feet toss about- 
       i
am kind of lost on the way; 
       
      ..........I squint my eyes, gaze into the distance
Few yards away the water suddenly evaporates; 
               a spire of
smoke blurs my vision
                   
     Wind gets stronger, wilder from all directions
        Clatter, clatter, thud,
thud- sound of the horse’s hooves, 
               and
footsteps turn the ambiance hellish
               
  The penumbra- dense and dark keeps moving; tugs at me
                 
   ….motes of disturbed dust rise; 
                 
           My mystery hero leaps out!
        Rivulets of sweat pour
down my face
                 it
is good to be left with a satisfying mystery; so
                 I
hold my breath, lauding my insatiable heart
         - I pray, ‘God, give me
patience, strength..
          Let me connect, and listen to
his tales’;
Slowly the dark clouds suck out all the light; fog steams the
strand
         And we fall into
each other's net--the spirit casts his spell 
                
   The darkness deepens- I am unable to move...
          He looks at me; laughs
hysterically- things start changing soon
Sounds of the clattering hooves, footfalls of his boots start
receding…
             Soft lights curl
up along the waterfront...
The blood-red boulders face-up; the river begins to breathe
         
                Stirs
up the slow ripples on the surface
       Silhouetted figure turns to the shoreline
                ….and
vanish deep in the night
I remember the island that has gone under
Enchanting are these outworldly forces..
Written for Kim's prompt in 31 lines! @http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.in/2013/10/verse-first-ghosts-spirits-scares.html
 
 
love this ambience of mystery,horror and sadness......
ReplyDeleteloved it...
ReplyDeleteThat opening line... sludge squelching underfoot... hooked me!
ReplyDeleteWonderful. You are too good.
ReplyDeleteI'm delighted. I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteGreetings from Polish far.
Lucia
Hmm... quite an ambiance you've created there.
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whew. i think i would rather the nature...the bit of peace you return to there in the end...with the boulder and water....enchanting indeed...smiles.
ReplyDeleteloved it :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the poem and Panchaliji you are too good.
ReplyDeleteGood flow of words!
ReplyDeleteNice read.
Panchali, I really enjoyed the scene that you created here! Wonderful images. Not easy to do exactly 31 lines either. Smiles.
ReplyDeletePowerful composition!
ReplyDeleteWow ... a perfect composition ... love the enigma of the mystery hero :-)
ReplyDeleteYou have a fantastic imagination & equally vibrant descriptive powers Panchali.
ReplyDeleteA mystical scene well presented. Imaginative and a captivating read. :-)
ReplyDelete-HA
Loved the emotions beautifully penned down !
ReplyDeletebeauty in the words...
ReplyDeleteLovely selection of words, Panchali:)
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