tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6756391608984993711.post2358929071761446981..comments2024-03-09T23:49:54.435+05:30Comments on Panchalibolchi: Locked In A Tunnel Of Smoke~Panchalihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6756391608984993711.post-90895812825858598442017-06-02T18:25:02.372+05:302017-06-02T18:25:02.372+05:30I, too, am enchanted the the vivid details.I, too, am enchanted the the vivid details.Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6756391608984993711.post-13709705398425929662017-06-02T12:23:54.463+05:302017-06-02T12:23:54.463+05:30Very powerful and well written Oh if only people w...Very powerful and well written Oh if only people would realise before .. drifting away<br />Marjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6756391608984993711.post-28059963909036443632017-06-02T05:27:47.973+05:302017-06-02T05:27:47.973+05:30What a portrait you painted. (taken in his last br...What a portrait you painted. (taken in his last breath)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6756391608984993711.post-32045206986483155842017-06-01T23:19:00.713+05:302017-06-01T23:19:00.713+05:30What smoking can do to the lungs is scary, and you...What smoking can do to the lungs is scary, and you paint that picture so well here. Moving piece!Khaya Ronkainenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06286352495379234651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6756391608984993711.post-36170987564516146562017-06-01T22:25:29.707+05:302017-06-01T22:25:29.707+05:30You have made the Hell silent and put it on earth ...You have made the Hell silent and put it on earth so that release into the blue smoke is a gentle relief. But, oh, the pain of the watchers! One of my good friends told me years ago not to expect her to sit by my bedside if smoking--something preventable--was what killed me. I wonder if she remembers? Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6756391608984993711.post-61196053861294482412017-06-01T20:17:46.991+05:302017-06-01T20:17:46.991+05:30One aspect of smoking smokers should consider........One aspect of smoking smokers should consider.....that eventually the lungs suffer. You have described this so well, Panchali. I could see it all. I especially love "my breath was also unbreathing."Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6756391608984993711.post-1609559823318616882017-06-01T18:31:32.702+05:302017-06-01T18:31:32.702+05:30smoking does just that; letting the final moment a...smoking does just that; letting the final moment arrive when it's not time...i like the vivid details & the scene of anxious anticipation...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.com